fix: Reword I-D announcement emails to make first sentence more useful (#6193)

Fixes #6092
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Lars Eggert 2023-08-24 16:19:30 +03:00 committed by GitHub
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2 changed files with 28 additions and 28 deletions

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{% autoescape off %}
A new version of I-D, {{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt
has been successfully submitted by {{ submission.submitter_parsed.name }} and posted to the
IETF repository.
{% autoescape off %}{% filter wordwrap:78 %}A new version of Internet-Draft {{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt has been successfully submitted by {{ submission.submitter_parsed.name }} and posted to the
IETF repository.{% endfilter %}
Name: {{ submission.name }}
Revision: {{ submission.rev }}
Title: {{ submission.title }}
Document date: {{ submission.document_date|date:"Y-m-d" }}
Group: {{ group }}
Pages: {{ submission.pages }}
URL: {{ settings.IETF_ID_ARCHIVE_URL }}{{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt
Status: {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.doc.views_doc.document_main' name=submission.name %}{% if submission.xml_version == "3" %}
Html: {{ settings.IETF_ID_ARCHIVE_URL }}{{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.html{% endif %}
Htmlized: {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.doc.views_doc.document_html' name=submission.name %}
{% if submission.rev != "00" %}Diff: {{rfcdiff_base_url}}?url2={{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}{% endif %}
Name: {{ submission.name }}
Revision: {{ submission.rev }}
Title: {{ submission.title }}
Date: {{ submission.document_date|date:"Y-m-d" }}
Group: {{ group }}
Pages: {{ submission.pages }}
URL: {{ settings.IETF_ID_ARCHIVE_URL }}{{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt
Status: {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.doc.views_doc.document_main' name=submission.name %}{% if submission.xml_version == "3" %}
HTML: {{ settings.IETF_ID_ARCHIVE_URL }}{{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.html{% endif %}
HTMLized: {{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.doc.views_doc.document_html' name=submission.name %}
{% if submission.rev != "00" %}Diff: {{rfcdiff_base_url}}?url2={{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}{% endif %}
Abstract:
{{ submission.abstract }}
{{ submission.note|default:"" }}
{{ submission.abstract.rstrip }}
{{ submission.note.rstrip|default:"" }}
The IETF Secretariat
{% endautoescape %}

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{% autoescape off %}
{% filter wordwrap:78 %}A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.{% if submission.group %} This Internet-Draft is a work item of the {{ submission.group.name }} ({{ submission.group.acronym|upper }}){% if submission.group.type.name %} {{ submission.group.type.name }}{% endif %} of the {% if submission.group.type_id == "rg" %}IRTF{% else %}IETF{% endif %}.{% endif %}{% endfilter %}
{% autoescape off %}{% filter wordwrap:78 %}Internet-Draft {{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt is now available.{% if submission.group %} It is a work item of the {{ submission.group.name }} ({{ submission.group.acronym|upper }}){% if submission.group.type.name %} {{ submission.group.type.name }}{% endif %} of the {% if submission.group.type_id == "rg" %}IRTF{% else %}IETF{% endif %}.{% endif %}{% endfilter %}
Title : {{ submission.title }}
Author{{ submission.authors|pluralize:" ,s" }} : {% for author in submission.authors %}{{ author.name }}{% if not forloop.last %}
{% endif %}{% endfor %}
Filename : {{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt
Pages : {{ submission.pages }}
Date : {{ submission.submission_date|date:"Y-m-d" }}
Title: {{ submission.title }}
Author{{ submission.authors|pluralize:",s" }}: {% if submission.authors|length == 1 %} {% endif %}{% for author in submission.authors %}{{ author.name }}{% if not forloop.last %}
{% endif %}{% endfor %}
Name: {{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.txt
Pages: {{ submission.pages }}
Dates: {{ submission.submission_date|date:"Y-m-d" }}
Abstract:
{{ submission.abstract.rstrip }}
The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
@ -16,11 +16,12 @@ The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
{% if submission.xml_version == "3" %}
There is also an HTML version available at:
{{ settings.IETF_ID_ARCHIVE_URL }}{{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}.html{% else %}
There is also an htmlized version available at:
There is also an HTMLized version available at:
{{ settings.IDTRACKER_BASE_URL }}{% url 'ietf.doc.views_doc.document_html' name=submission.name rev=submission.rev %}{% endif %}
{% if submission.rev != "00" %}
A diff from the previous version is available at:
{{settings.RFCDIFF_BASE_URL}}?url2={{ submission.name }}-{{ submission.rev }}
{% endif %}
Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
{% endautoescape %}